Intro (guitar only) - suggest shortening this to 2 iterations from 4
Intro verse – could use a little something with it, second guitar bass line, strings, a little percussion, something
Intro verse – at the end of the intro, a single strike on a tubular bell would sound ominous
AoM entrance - going to experiment with the bass line
AoM entrance – the syncopation notes (.. Age .. Of .. Man) need some kind of counterpoint, I suggest some drum beats
AoM entrance – vocal harmonies are very nice here
AoM entrance - drums need to rock more, more backbeat
Guitar solo repeats the melody too much. Need to add some new parts to it
This song spends way too much time on the 1 chord. This could be remedied with one or two chord changes in the verse-chorus parts and by adding a contrasting bridge part to support the guitar solo.