Not a lot of comments on this song. I always thought it was our quintessential rock song.
I always liked the “live” audience, I would leave that in
This song is pitched way too low for the vocal. Must be the lowest rock song I’ve ever heard
Needs a bridge. With a new guitar solo. And maybe a key change, but returning to the original after the bridge.
The first lines of the song are what I would call “verse”, but this melody is never repeated. It should be, maybe with a second verse?
I may experiment with the bass line. Not sure about all the repeated notes.
This is a very spare song. Just guitar, bass and vocals. I wonder about adding a second guitar to it. Or maybe some organ or something. Maybe just more harmony vocals. I feel like the sound needs to be filled out.